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What I immediately noticed is that you use very confusing wording. Your sentences are usually simply or compound, with descriptive but ...

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Gazing into the eyes of a sheep
who is alive but mentally decayed
drives me mad, nearly insane
false facts and lies neatly arrayed.
The unseen movie that is life
haunts my every footstep
following me, leaving no tracks
only the patches of tears I wept
You tell me that I am someone
and I sit and blink
I try to consider your words
so carefully analyzed, yet casual
and it only makes me grieve
Woe for the life that could have been
thoughts to the boy who never grew up
drowning in his favourite poisons
despite the words of love itself.
The walls are stained with murderous memory
held within me the images of that day
relentlessly pulling their souls away from me
those souls whose destruction I now repay.
I am hiring people to do full body commissions! They can be lineart/sketch or colored. All I ask is that your style stick to realism, and you be comfortable with drawing armored/fantasy characters. My budget for most is between 1 and 30 USD. I look forward to hearing from you!
  • Listening to: Edguy
  • Reading: Malazan Book of the Fallen
  • Watching: -
I am hiring people to do full body commissions! They can be lineart/sketch or colored. All I ask is that your style stick to realism, and you be comfortable with drawing armored/fantasy characters. My budget for most is between 1 and 30 USD. I look forward to hearing from you!
  • Listening to: Edguy
  • Reading: Malazan Book of the Fallen
  • Watching: -

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:icondarkpriestesskaiou:
DarkPriestessKaiou Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite on Pomegranate Pt 4. :) 
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Red-Rat-Writer Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the llama,
bet you're wondering why I haven't posted any poems recently 
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:iconpoetboi:
PoetBoi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't been writing recently. Instead, I've been programming.
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:iconred-rat-writer:
Red-Rat-Writer Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ooh!
Lemme guess,
game design? 
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PoetBoi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yea. It has really caught my attention, haven't done much else because of it.
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niknholly1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
thanks for the fav darling!
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usagineko-san Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Thanks for the fave~!!
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WasSollDas Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you for the fave c:
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horseylover68 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
u should write a story about a boy who luved to write poetry Llama Emoji-46 (This and That) 

lol just a suggestion.....
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SuppaSaiyanSwagga Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the favorite! :3
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