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What I immediately noticed is that you use very confusing wording. Your sentences are usually simply or compound, with descriptive but ...

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So, my birthday has just passed and with it I think I will begin writing some. I have just finished Midnight Tides by Steven Erikson, and after the manly tear was shed I decided to write. So, that said, I'll have some new stuff up ASAP.
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I write whatever you want to prompt me to- Come at me. Otherwise, I write about other works of fiction, mostly the works of Tolkien and GRR Martin.
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thanks for the fav darling!
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WasSollDas Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you for the fave c:
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horseylover68 Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
u should write a story about a boy who luved to write poetry Llama Emoji-46 (This and That) 

lol just a suggestion.....
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SuppaSaiyanSwagga Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the favorite! :3
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thanks for the faves my friend
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icethewingedwolf Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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crissy92 Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much for the fav ^^
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