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You and I have fallen from grace
Broken in this forgotten place
Dead or dying, it makes no matter
I lie now and watch my own soul shatter.

I close my eyes and try to think
Piecing together the missing link
Remembering every little thing said;
Lying in this puddle of red.

Looking to you, remembering love
Watching you sleep, graceful as a dove
And though I slowly go insane
I remember the memories which will remain.
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~SakaneMiku Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like your writing. So much better than mine! ^^; I'm a really immature writer.
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~PoetBoi Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Give this group a check. If you want you can write against me in the tourney, since everyone in my bracket quit, lol. Either way, the group helps with learning and inspiration and includes a LOT of good writers.

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~SakaneMiku Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok! Thanks!
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~Annie1849 Mar 6, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful
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This is beautiful, it's got a sense of mystery to it
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~Hibiki3060 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, I love it! ^^
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The fourth line of the second stanza is confusing, but overall the poem is a profound statement of a grief I have experienced all too recently.
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Now I wonder why this person killed himself if the memories of love are good and the other person is not necessarily gone.
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